Haiku? (On Fire)


Salamander
By the water;
Am on fire!

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2 thoughts on “Haiku? (On Fire)

  1. Sorry, that isn’t a Haiku. A Haiku has the format of 5 syllables on the first and third lines, and 7 syllables in the second line. You are very close to one though! :3 My tip to making words having more syllables: Make the word plural. Hope this helps!

    1. Thank you Asia πŸ™‚ You are right, it is close but not there yet. I wrote it while I was learning to Haiku. πŸ™‚ Still learning … and here is how I have corrected it:

      Red Salamander
      Sleeps on hot stone by the pond
      Heart is on fire

      πŸ™‚

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